LI: To write a stretched sentence.
Who: The old lady walked.
What: The old lady walked slowly.
When:As night began to fall the old lady walked slowly
Where: At the strike of dawn, the old lady walked slowly through the park.
Why:At the strike of dawn, the old lady walked slowly through the park so she could go to watch the sunset go down.
Who: The Little girl
What:The little girl danced like a ballerina.
When:As sunset fell, the little girl danced like a ballerina
Where:As sunset fell, the little girl danced like a ballerina through the garden,
Where:As sunset fell, the little girl danced like a ballerina through the garden,
Why:As sunset fell, the little girl danced like a ballerina through the garden to
practise her ballet dancing.
Who: The Little Boy
What:The Little Boy cried
When: As night fell, the little boy cried
Where: As night fell, the little boy cried while looking out his window
Why: As night fell, the little boy cried while looking out his window as lightning approached the sky.
Today in LS2 the year 7 & 8's had to stretch our sentences to make our sentences longer and powerful, while using the 5 W's.
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