This blog is a record of my learning from Panmure Bridge Primary School through to Tamaki College.
Hi Jessie and jorjaI like the cover of your work and the thing i do not like is your sentence it's because your sentence ends with the same ending.
Good presentation Jessie-Lee and Jorja. Maybe you could reword some of your ideas so they don't sound so similar. For example, Be kind to others could say A great classmate: is kind to other class members, Panmure Bridge students and teachers.
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Hi Jessie and jorja
I like the cover of your work and the thing i do not like is your sentence it's because your sentence ends with the same ending.
Good presentation Jessie-Lee and Jorja. Maybe you could reword some of your ideas so they don't sound so similar. For example, Be kind to others could say A great classmate: is kind to other class members, Panmure Bridge students and teachers.
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