My Recount with a twist

NO!!!!! Why can’t my Nan go to the shop I thought.

“NO you go!!!” she said in a big loud voice. “Fine, I’m going!” I replied. My nan gave me $10.

My nan told me to get chips, lollies, bread and milk  and I said “okay”. But when I went on the bike and when I got to the shop and pulled out the money it was not money it was actually clothes. When I looked up the shops weren't there. Until I felt weird  I was spinning around and around until I fainted like I didn’t feel the ground.

My nan was so worried about me because I fainted by the invisible shops. This person saw me and she was shaking me and shaking and telling me to get up. She went in my pockets and looked to see if i had a phone. Lucky  I did. Then she rang my nan  and said “Do you have a  granddaughter?”  My nan said “ yes why”

My nan and this lady picked me up and we went to the hospital  they  took me to  level 9. The doctor said that i can see different things wherever i go.  

When I heard that I was so shocked that I couldn't see anything. Then the doctor said that i can go home. I had to Lay in bed for the whole week then i could  go to school.